PLEASE DON'T READ THIS...
(Hunted out this veeerrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy olddddd poem from somewhere, wrote it in class 8 I guess, for a friend who had a huuuuuuuuugggge crush on a friend of mine, and u know what..it worked!;)
Am posting it just like that, old memories i guess...don't expect anything out of this!)
Your beautiful eyes...that inspire awe,
that reflect your assurance of love and care.
That sparkle with innocence-so pure so flawless..
And promise me you will always be there!
There is something about them…
- That leaves me bewildered,
Enraptured; though in a maze-
Of questions unanswered…
Those perfect pearls-as gleaming as ice…
They keep me alive-your beautiful eyes
posted by Phoenix @ 11:59 AM
15 Comments:
At Thursday, May 05, 2005 12:19:00 PM,
adarsh said…
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|At Thursday, May 05, 2005 12:19:00 PM,
adarsh said…
strated writing poetry in 8th class itself? :-o
|At Thursday, May 05, 2005 3:23:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
banner, poetess wagarah kuch nahi hoon main..
|badnam mat karo
cmon adarsh, so many ppl write stuff like this in class 6
At Thursday, May 05, 2005 3:43:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
:o
|ye kya hai?
At Thursday, May 05, 2005 3:48:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
thanxxxxxxxx...but tumne meri aankhen kab dekh li?
|At Thursday, May 05, 2005 3:56:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
envisager plays cupid...
|At Thursday, May 05, 2005 4:00:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
tasveer mein aankhen dhang se nahi dikhti...aur woh certainly bful nahi hai
|and mr. anon...thanx, aise kam bahut kiye hain maine..leikn aapne kaha nahi achha hai ki nahi, cupid banna
At Thursday, May 05, 2005 4:04:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
no arguments......
|not with u ;)
At Thursday, May 05, 2005 6:24:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
Good poem, Ted :-)
|~Time [8)]
At Thursday, May 05, 2005 6:29:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
Poem maine likhi aur tareef ted ki?
|mentor X-(
At Friday, May 06, 2005 12:41:00 AM,
Raja said…
Ted used it in a more direct and more meaningful context :-)
|At Friday, May 06, 2005 3:57:00 AM,
The Thinker said…
If it worked the first time, it MUST work the second time, too, provided it's used with sincerety [8)]
|At Friday, May 06, 2005 3:23:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
recent adventures as in playing-cupid-types?
|are bahut hain!
aise bahut kam kiye hain maine...
tumhe advice chahiye ho to u're most welcome ;)
:)
At Wednesday, February 21, 2007 3:12:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
Excellent, love it! » »
|At Thursday, March 08, 2007 6:37:00 PM,
Vik said…
Comments on this blog are certainly more interesting :P
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