WILL THE DROPLETS FALL?
A few molecules of existence
Trying to cohese with their kind
Yet adhering to the alien for support
Life struggling to come to life
The few molecules of existence
Daughters of sorrow, sons of pain
The old, the fresh and the ancient
The obvious, the latent and the visibly faint
Held back by a spirit that isn't yet shattered
Just injured and wounded, indelibly deep
Held back against flooding the plateau beneath
And the valley of dimples with their agonising creep
A few still escape from the hidden depths
Of an anguished heart plunged in the dark
Knitted together by threads of hurt
Yet from a distance, just a dainty spark
At the corner of the eye, hiding themselves
For the sake of dignity and protocol
Beholding epics of pain untold
Wonder if the droplets will ever fall?
Trying to cohese with their kind
Yet adhering to the alien for support
Life struggling to come to life
The few molecules of existence
Daughters of sorrow, sons of pain
The old, the fresh and the ancient
The obvious, the latent and the visibly faint
Held back by a spirit that isn't yet shattered
Just injured and wounded, indelibly deep
Held back against flooding the plateau beneath
And the valley of dimples with their agonising creep
A few still escape from the hidden depths
Of an anguished heart plunged in the dark
Knitted together by threads of hurt
Yet from a distance, just a dainty spark
At the corner of the eye, hiding themselves
For the sake of dignity and protocol
Beholding epics of pain untold
Wonder if the droplets will ever fall?
25 Comments:
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:02:00 PM, Anonymous said…
using lotsa heavy words eh?
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:10:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Heavy? Where? The whole poem doesnt weigh more than 1.239865 milligrams,does it???
|:P
atleast leave a signatue mr. anon...a letter or symbol or smthng..
refering to so many anonymous ppl is tough :(
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:11:00 PM, Anonymous said…
ha ! you'll never catch me alive !!
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:15:00 PM, Phoenix said…
so now do i have to die to get u?
|OMG,will the droplets of wisdom ever fall on this reverred reader!
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:16:00 PM, Anonymous said…
"me alive" as in ME ALIVE
|i have a cyanide link on my online identity and if u try to force me i'll take it...hehe
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:18:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Do me a favour...email me some of the link pls?
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:19:00 PM, Phoenix said…
still no comments on the poem from u?
|apart from the weight of the words.
:(
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:20:00 PM, Anonymous said…
u won't need it... neway me gtg
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:23:00 PM, Anonymous said…
ya the poem.....cool... i'm no lit. major so the words don't go easily on the head..:P
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:30:00 PM, Dylan said…
yes. the droplets willl fall, its gravity man, GRAVITY!
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 4:30:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Thank you Dylan and Albert for dropping by..
|And ur blogs are pretty cool..I like them. Thanx!
Angad,bap re aapko sher-o-shayari ke alwa kuch nahi soojhta kya?
Ek post ke comments ko hum already "mushayara" bana chuke hain, aur yahan bhi :D
anyway, achha hai..mujhe bhi ek yad aa gaya hai..
Ashkon ko palkon mein chhupana seekh liya
Mehfil mein tanha muskurana seekh liya
Kuch aisi karwat badli aindagi ne meri
Ki dil se aansu, aankhon se khoon, bahana seekh liya!
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 4:32:00 PM, Phoenix said…
@Banner
|Isme samajhne jaisa tha bhi kya?
Paani ki kuch adh-janmi boondon ke peechhe pad gayi main to! :D
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 4:41:00 PM, Phoenix said…
molecule is just an expression dear...a few molecules of water, gradually colelcting themselves and gathering together at a corner of the eye as the semblance of a little tear, and stirred by this imagination, the stupid poet(thats me :D) writes so many lines wondering if the tear will ever fall!!!
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 4:43:00 PM, adarsh said…
y do u write most of the poems on Sorrow and Pain?
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 4:51:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Adarsh, uh, well...i guess it's an easy topic to write, or relate..
|but it's not entirely true..i write almost on all topics.
there're positive posts too...like hope,and articles like my answer, and other old stuff..
maybe the newer crop has more proportion of pain...I'll take note
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 4:52:00 PM, Phoenix said…
thanx angad
|At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:02:00 PM, Anonymous said…
Finally i could open the comments page. :)))
|Nice thoughts ... lekin pata nahi kyon mujhe lag raha hai ki you could have written this much better in hindi.
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:06:00 PM, Anonymous said…
Finally i could open the comments page. :)))
|Nice thoughts ... lekin pata nahi kyon mujhe lag raha hai ki you could have written this much better in hindi.
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:07:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Arey yar, ye sab hindi ke peechhe kyon pade hain
|ab same idea ko hindi mein likhoon kya?
anyways thanx
At Sunday, May 01, 2005 8:15:00 AM, Anonymous said…
Excellent, Taru [:)]
|(correct the spelling of 'against')
~ Time [8)]
At Sunday, May 01, 2005 1:42:00 PM, Anonymous said…
Was doing some gen surfing around and turned up here... and found my link. Thanks so much :)
|At Monday, May 02, 2005 10:16:00 AM, Phoenix said…
Thanx raja,
|anytime keerthi
ur blog is very nice
banner, translation comin soon :P
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