Har baat pe gussa aana tha shayad
Fir bhi har baat pe pyar hi aaya
Jitna dard bada, utna hi zyada
Khud ko us dard se mohabbat mein paya
Woh jo khushi ki jhalak, mujhe dard dekar
Tere chehre pe thi ayi, usne har dard bhulaya
Aur ek aansu bhi baha tha, par woh mujhe chot dekar
Tere haath pe lagi kharoch pe tha aya!
posted by Phoenix @ 11:22 AM
14 Comments:
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 11:45:00 AM,
Phoenix said…
Khud se bhi mohabbat hone lagi hai
|Kuch aisa asar kiya hai kisi ki chahat ne..
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:01:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
baat labon ki jagah ashkon mein nikli hai
|ye kambakht zabaan kyonki bas chup rehna chahti hai...
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 12:13:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
jaadu hi hai shayad, jo sapnon ko poora karne ke liye
|ye nazren aapki nazron mein sachmuch utarna chahti hain
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:01:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
door rehkar bhi jaana hai tujhe itna kareebs se
|kabhi paas aakar dekh tujhe khud se mila doonga
teri berukhi se bhi ki hai itni mohabbat
kabhi pyar se dekha tune to jaan luta doonga
ek bar mauka dekh, hai mere pyar mein woh dam
ki teri aankh ka aansu apni aankh se gira doonga
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:02:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
@ banner
|lol..
that was nice
ye dil hai lakdi ka tukda nahi
ki aari se kata aurfevicol se jod diya
ye kaanch ki moorat hai janab
chot karoge to darar to padegi!
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:19:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
mar bhi jate agar ye khayal na ata
|ki mar kar to teri jhalak ko bhi tarsenge
tu door hi sahi magar yahan samne to hai
to kya hua agar ye aansu kuch aur din barsenge!!
waise tumhari lines padke the first thing that came to my mind was:
Kitne bhi to kar le sitam
Has has ke sahenge hum
ye pyar na hoga kam
sanam teri kasam
:)))
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:30:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
kya complex le rahe ho ted...
|yahan aana chhodoge ??:O X-(
aur waise dekha jaye to koi bhi original post pe comment kyon nahi karta :((
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:36:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
Chori ke sher suna rahe ho?
|anyways,
Koi aankhon aaknhon mein bat kar leta hai
koi aankhon aankhon mein mulaqat kar leta hai
mushkil hota hai jawab dena
jab koi chup rehkar bhi sawal kar leta hai1
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 5:57:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
haha good one
|:)
aapki galtiyan bhi sar-aankhon pe hazoor
kuch bhi kahiye, par kahiye zaroor!
asli ya nakli, apna ya paraya
jo bhi man mein aye use keh daal na khajoor
:P
just kiddin, dont mind the khajoor :)
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 6:02:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
what you'd do to make words rhyme...
|of all things, "khajoor" !!????
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 6:12:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
thanx for the support angad
|but yeah that was the aim actually
not just rhyming words, but a choice that adds spice to the whole thing
havent u ever heard of such poetry,my dear Mr. too-coward-to criticise-openly anonymous!
At Saturday, April 30, 2005 6:13:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
lol ted
|mera bahut influence ho gaya hai tumhare doston pe shayd!
At Monday, May 02, 2005 9:23:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
please aap log mere is post ko mind na karna...
|lekin shayad aaj tak, series main itne saare, itne achche sher maine nahin padhe hain...
mast ho gaya hoon...
sher-e-punjab..good going .. and change your name to shayer-e-punjab
banner ... last post ke baad main kya kahoon samajh nahin aa raha hai
envisager... fallen short of words
angad... that was good fight puts.. bravo!
At Saturday, November 14, 2009 11:25:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
Who knows where to download XRumer 5.0 Palladium?
|Help, please. All recommend this program to effectively advertise on the Internet, this is the best program!
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