I AM NO MORE...
No more do i wonder anymore whether
The mirage far away is water or mere sand
No more do I care what anybody feels
No more do I want to understand
No more do I ponder over what to do
Whether knowledge or fun is more important
No more do I stare at the stars and dream
about tomorrow-for dreams are redundant
No more do I wonder for hours at a stretch
If it's love or lust or jus infatuation
No more do I wander aimlessly through night
Blissfully mindless, far from confusion
No more does anyting simulate my mind
No more do I seek any answer
No more do I find pleasing and entertaining
The notes of a singer, the moves of a dancer
No more am I able to think,
no more have I a desire
"I" does not exist anymore
The me in me has retired...
posted by Phoenix @ 12:20 PM
16 Comments:
At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 1:19:00 PM,
Ravi Dixit said…
yesterday only i read your post "My comment" and today it's this... samajhte mushkil hoti hai ki dono post ek aadmi ne likhe hain...
|lekin achchi hai...
At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 1:38:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
ted,this poem speaks not of my egocentricity..i'm still a self-obsessed egotist..this is just the announcement of the demise of the soul, and my self-esteem.
|but basically, it's just yet another emotion of a different type. not evrything has to be good and well-written ravi, it doesnt have to feel good.
it's a little bit of "everything" remember?
At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 1:39:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
btw ravi, i can see suddenly u have increased the frequency of visiting my blog...thanxxxxxxxxxx
|suddenly itna time kahan se mil gaya aapko?
and wat is it that u find most starkingl different bw the prvs post and this?
At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 2:02:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
but ravi doesnt have time for us..or for readin this blog, or for ever scrappin me on orkut :(
|At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 3:40:00 PM,
how does it matter said…
nice poem .
|At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 8:33:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
the legal age of retirement is around 60 yrs, keep that in mind.
|At Thursday, April 28, 2005 10:35:00 AM,
Phoenix said…
And what if i say i feel like 1600 years old already :((((
|At Thursday, April 28, 2005 11:57:00 AM,
Phoenix said…
lol..
|yeah, i am something like that..radioactive..dangerous and active :P
anyway photon is one of my nicks :D
thanx for the comment abhishek, but u really dont have to call a crappy poem gripping just so that u put in a polite comment!
At Thursday, April 28, 2005 12:56:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
if u managed 1600 years why not 60 more....hehe
|At Thursday, April 28, 2005 1:10:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
if you don't mind criticism
|this poem of urs is not as good as the other masterpieces
is it a sponti?
At Thursday, April 28, 2005 5:41:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
Yeah u r right...
|this poem is absolute shit and crap, and written with an effort of 3mins writing time+ 5mins typing time flat...
to tell the truth, the main reason why i wrote it was to see how many ppl actually praise it, because then i can now how much of the praise normally received is false and merely flattery.
Glad there's atleast someone who doesnt believe in flattery.
you don't have to comment anonymously.
At Thursday, April 28, 2005 6:03:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
Lekin gandi hai ted..
|tumhe to meri har writing pasand hai..
**sighs**
At Thursday, April 28, 2005 6:17:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
theek hai yar
|tumhe contradict karke marna hai kya? :P
At Thursday, April 28, 2005 6:28:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
are bilkul nahi...
|(anything to escape an agrument with him...who would contradict the grt jhandu)
:)))))
At Friday, April 29, 2005 5:08:00 PM,
adarsh said…
good one...
|At Sunday, May 01, 2005 8:09:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
Nice one My Mentee [:)]
|may change the first line
and, correct the spelling of 'stimulate'
~ Time [8)]
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