Mohabbat aur chahat
mohabbat ki gehraiyon ko chhoone se pehle
dosti ki hadon ke par humko jaana hai
tumhe apne banane se pehle
khud ko tumhara banake dikhana hai
aarzoo nhai hai kuch paane ki tumse
aarzoo yehi hai ki khud ko tumpe lutana hai
mohabbat aur chahat ke beech ka antar
duniya ko ab sabit kar ke dikhana hai!!!
posted by Phoenix @ 4:51 PM
8 Comments:
At Tuesday, April 26, 2005 5:08:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
i still dont understand what u like so much about it..
|sigh...
At Tuesday, April 26, 2005 5:12:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
pata nahi, love is not my domain
|but i wish it were possible!
At Tuesday, April 26, 2005 9:04:00 PM,
Ravi Dixit said…
well, i won't say it's the best, but among the better ones....
|Love has a great ability to transform you into a better person... i feel so!
people start to feel happiness in happiness of others.
mohabbat main lut jaana hi
ashiqon ka inaam hota hai,
shayad isi liye parwana,
shama par kurbaan hota hai...
At Tuesday, April 26, 2005 9:06:00 PM,
Ravi Dixit said…
Lekin ek baar yeh shaitan kisiko apni changul me fansaa, to uska shaitaan ke giraft se nikalna namumkin ho jaata hai,... experience hai ted ya phir yuhi hi phek rahe ho...:)
|At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 12:46:00 AM,
Ravi Dixit said…
yaha DIXIT sahab jaise shayar maujood hain ..to meri aukat to hai nahi kuch kahne ki Banner bhai... mere jaise shayar jahan hote hain wahan se sab log bhag jaate hain. pata hai kyon... ki kahin agla sher sunna na pad jaaye.... mere blog mai likhe sher padh kar tumko andaza ho jaayega ki mai kitna bada shayar hoon :))
|At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 1:24:00 AM,
The Thinker said…
Superb, Kiddo!
|(and I knew this was coming) ;-)
At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 12:16:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
I dunno what so many ppl like abt thi on...sounds like a major cliche`d to me!!:(
|in any case thanx ted, raja, banner, angad,ravi!
anyway, the best part is that ye jagah sher-o-shayari competiion ya "mushayara" banti ja rahi hai...
thanx ppl :)
both of u, banner, and ravi, wrie quite well yar...and even angad.
and ted, yeah sure, i'm alwas there to pull ur leg...just read ur RG...usme jo nhi kaha woh min kehna shuru kar doon???:D
At Wednesday, April 27, 2005 3:46:00 PM,
how does it matter said…
mujhe bhi yahi poochna hai ki envisager ko aisa kya pataa hai jo hamen nahin pata?
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