TANHA....
Dekhiye to zindagi ki raahon mein
Har taraf ek bheed chalti hai
Sochiye to bheed mein chalta
har koi hai tanha...
Dekhiye to waqt ka sath dene ko
Kis tarah daud rahe hain sab
Dekhiye to age waqt hai aur peechhe
Sab daud rahe hain tanha...
Dekhiye to sab bandhe hain sang
Rishton ki nazuq doron se
Sochiye to bas kuch bandhan hain
Jinmein har ik phansa hai tanha...
Dekhiye to har taraf mere
Hai woh sab kuch jo maine paya hai
Sochiye to mera kya hai
duniya se to jana hai tanha...
Har taraf ek bheed chalti hai
Sochiye to bheed mein chalta
har koi hai tanha...
Dekhiye to waqt ka sath dene ko
Kis tarah daud rahe hain sab
Dekhiye to age waqt hai aur peechhe
Sab daud rahe hain tanha...
Dekhiye to sab bandhe hain sang
Rishton ki nazuq doron se
Sochiye to bas kuch bandhan hain
Jinmein har ik phansa hai tanha...
Dekhiye to har taraf mere
Hai woh sab kuch jo maine paya hai
Sochiye to mera kya hai
duniya se to jana hai tanha...
posted by Phoenix @ 3:07 PM
15 Comments:
At Tuesday, April 05, 2005 3:49:00 PM,
Ravi Dixit said…
ek aur nayab kriti tumhari...
|tanha dil, tanha safar,
doondhe tujhe phir kyon nazar....
tanha dil..
sach main tanha mehsoos karna ya na karna sirf ek nazariya hai... koi akele ho kar bhi tanha nahin to koi bheed ke beech bhi akela rehta hai..
achchi kriti hai..[:)]
At Tuesday, April 05, 2005 6:40:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
is it a song?
|sing it like "Socha tha sahir pe milega thehra sa ek pal" [:)]
~ Time [8)]
At Wednesday, April 06, 2005 1:26:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
Ravi, who's Kriti? :P
|At Wednesday, April 06, 2005 1:39:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
@Ravi
|thanx, but zyada nahi ho gaya thoda? :O
@ted
tum tanha nahi, akele ho sakte ho...
aur hum sab to hain heen
@Mentor...
song....naa..i dont think so...maybe u can tune it up
I once wrote a song(or two?) and they were so crappy.....:D
@banner
humne kab kaha tanhai gum hai koi
sach, tanhai ke sahare hi to gummon ko piya jata hai
ab to bheed mein bhi charon taraf hai wohi mere
tanhai se shayad mera kai janmon ka nata hai
kehna to main bas ye chahti thi,
ki yoonhi darte hain sab tanhai se
ye zindagi ek tanha daud hi to hai
koi burai se bhage koi bhalai se
haan dil bahut bada hai is tanhai ka
jo deti hai har akele dil ko panah
dekho to tum zara aas pas
sach har koi hai tanha....
At Wednesday, April 06, 2005 7:57:00 PM,
Ravi Dixit said…
to kya mai ab 2 sabd bhi nahin keh sakta... "nayaab kriti" kya yeh bhi kuch zayada lag rahe hain tumko .... yaaaaaaaaar.........[:(]
|At Wednesday, April 06, 2005 8:01:00 PM,
Ravi Dixit said…
oh! mai bhi ekdum gaya guzra hoon... tumhara comment bhi nahin samjh paya.
|agli baar se yaad rakhoonga ki sirf yeh kehna, "ki kiski kaun kavita kaisi (6 k's wow!) lagi"...kisi aur ki kavita saath mai add nahin karoonga... tab to nahin kahogi na ki kuch zayada ho gaya[:P][:)]
At Thursday, April 07, 2005 1:27:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
lagta hai hum dono ke vichar bahut milte hain
|jo samay samay pe shabdon ke sahare man se nikalte hain
samajh gayi main ki aapne kyon tanhai ko apnaya hai
par yoon gam mein kyon jeete ho, aise kaun se dukh ka saya hai?
aisa koi nahi jisko gam na ho dost
par jeena zindadili ka naam hai
gam ya khushi dena uske haatho mein
aur haske usko sweekar karna hamara kaam hai!
At Thursday, April 14, 2005 2:25:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
This can make a wonderful song
|Why the second stanza is not "Dekhiye to ........ Sochiye to ........"
donno why, I didn't like - Jinmein har ik phansa hai tanha
~ Time [8)]
At Friday, April 15, 2005 6:14:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
U're right..it is actually "sochiye"
|I just didne notice...
and none else either :o :x
thanx...
At Thursday, April 21, 2005 2:53:00 AM,
Ravi Dixit said…
Zindagi beeti kuch is kadar tanha
|Kafila saath magar safar tanha
raat guzarti hai sannato mein
zindagi guzri kuch is kadar tanha
Kisi anjaan shayar ka sher hai ...
At Thursday, April 21, 2005 11:22:00 AM,
Phoenix said…
sher achha hai Ravi, but i dont like the last line...steals the punch...
|how about
"aur sannaton ki goonj sunte hain hum tanha" instead...:P
At Tuesday, April 26, 2005 12:07:00 PM,
Phoenix said…
hmmm..why do u read it again and again but?
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