Kya Woh Katre Chhalkenge Kabhi?
(All right, this one is a lame attempt at a hindi translation of the previos "Droplet" poem, purely on public demand. But as a warning, please do not expect anything good-it's exam time!! And trust me, translation proved a more difficult job than writing for the first time!)
Kuch katre jeewan ke
Jeewan ke panjon se bachte-bachate
Dard se sani dastanon ko
Apne garbh mein chhupate-chhupate
Har katre ko bhigoye hai rakha
Ek un-sahe un-kahe ehsaas ne
Ek dukh ne jise ab kuch mehsoos hi nahi hota
Dard bhula diya dard ke nirantar aabhas ne
Kuch hai jo is dard ko ubharne nahi deta
Ek wajood tak ka haq nahi milta hai use
Shayad ek nischay hai jo jeewit hai ab tak
Shayad duniya ke riwazon ka lihaaz hai use
Aise hi bahut se bandhan, bahut si deewaron ke
Bawjood satah tak pahunche hain
Door se dekho to nainon ki chamak se lagte hain
Itne gehre andheron se jo guzre hain
Ab tak jeewan bacha hai jinme
Poochhna hai un jeewan ke katron se
Jo aankh ke ek kone main ghar kiye baithe hain
Kya chhalkenge kabhi woh nazron se?
Kuch katre jeewan ke
Jeewan ke panjon se bachte-bachate
Dard se sani dastanon ko
Apne garbh mein chhupate-chhupate
Har katre ko bhigoye hai rakha
Ek un-sahe un-kahe ehsaas ne
Ek dukh ne jise ab kuch mehsoos hi nahi hota
Dard bhula diya dard ke nirantar aabhas ne
Kuch hai jo is dard ko ubharne nahi deta
Ek wajood tak ka haq nahi milta hai use
Shayad ek nischay hai jo jeewit hai ab tak
Shayad duniya ke riwazon ka lihaaz hai use
Aise hi bahut se bandhan, bahut si deewaron ke
Bawjood satah tak pahunche hain
Door se dekho to nainon ki chamak se lagte hain
Itne gehre andheron se jo guzre hain
Ab tak jeewan bacha hai jinme
Poochhna hai un jeewan ke katron se
Jo aankh ke ek kone main ghar kiye baithe hain
Kya chhalkenge kabhi woh nazron se?
11 Comments:
At Monday, May 02, 2005 12:23:00 PM, Phoenix said…
:(((
|ab ye bhi kisi ki samajh mein nahi aa rahi kya :((
I guess I'm turning abstract day by day!
Original heavy thi, to ye bhi to hogi..
dono ka first comment heaviness pe hi hai.
Gawwwwwwwdddddddddd!
At Monday, May 02, 2005 12:28:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Prashansa!!!
|Banner, ye kaisi baatein kar rahe ho yar :O
Itna chane ke jhaad pe mat chadao
tumne kaha tha translate karo isliye kar di..
lekin itna mat udao hawa mein mujhe
jab giroongi to bahut zor se lagegi...
Shabdon ka itna misuse(dur-upyog) nahi karna chahiye
At Monday, May 02, 2005 12:33:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Haan woh hai ted..
|lekin chane ke jhaad pe chadane walon mein sabse aage tum hi ho!
At Monday, May 02, 2005 12:38:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Good, and thanx...
|At Monday, May 02, 2005 12:41:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Chadao, chidao, kuch bhi karo, par itne gande mat uchhalo!!!
|At Monday, May 02, 2005 1:27:00 PM, Anonymous said…
with a blog as hot as this, who needs tlte ;) ???
|At Monday, May 02, 2005 4:52:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Naah, tlte is still tlte..and it rocks :D
|Ted and Angad, see it's each one his own choice. I've written both, but angad is right in saying that original is afterall original.If u ask me even i'll like that one more. even though essentially both say the same things.
And this is but a lame effort to meet public demand :P
At Monday, May 02, 2005 4:56:00 PM, Phoenix said…
and ted, "your" lack of command over english!!!!!:O
|Whoa!!!
And u r talkin as if u r a Ph. D. in Hindi!!!
hehe
@banner
have read enough english on ur blog..so dont be over modest here!!:D
At Monday, May 02, 2005 5:04:00 PM, Phoenix said…
and then i dont know ABCD yet...
|need to get admission to pre nry i guess!
At Monday, May 02, 2005 9:52:00 PM, Anonymous said…
and then i dont know ABCD yet..... yeh kya hai.. mujhe to yeh bhi nahin pata
|:-P
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