BLACK BEAUTY
Just struck my mind
What if I were blind?
What if I did lack
A colour in life, except black?
What if I could have cried
But couldn't, even if I'd tried
See my own tear
A drop of water, crystal clear?
What if I never knew
How a tiny drop of dew
On a shimmery leaf appeared
And shone through when sunlight steered?
What if I could have felt
Touched and also smelt
The wet sand and the grasses tall
But never saw the raindrops fall?
What if I couldn't take a step
Without help, or without falling ahead
Me, goggles and a stick
Tightly and helplessly, trying to grip?
What if I didn't know
Dark and light, high and low
Just lived an entire life-dragged & slow
And never ever saw a rainbow!
What if I never "saw" a smile?
If the word "mirror" meant "futile"?
If I never saw little kids play?
All this(pause)would've been GOOD, I'd say!!
For then, all the filth, all the malice
The pain, the evil, the avarice
Would have been lost in the darkness of sight
For evil is evil only when something's bright
Then from my "eyes"
"Bad" would be as good as "nice"
Atleast I'd have a reason to believe
The world is a wonderful place to live!!
What if I were blind?
What if I did lack
A colour in life, except black?
What if I could have cried
But couldn't, even if I'd tried
See my own tear
A drop of water, crystal clear?
What if I never knew
How a tiny drop of dew
On a shimmery leaf appeared
And shone through when sunlight steered?
What if I could have felt
Touched and also smelt
The wet sand and the grasses tall
But never saw the raindrops fall?
What if I couldn't take a step
Without help, or without falling ahead
Me, goggles and a stick
Tightly and helplessly, trying to grip?
What if I didn't know
Dark and light, high and low
Just lived an entire life-dragged & slow
And never ever saw a rainbow!
What if I never "saw" a smile?
If the word "mirror" meant "futile"?
If I never saw little kids play?
All this(pause)would've been GOOD, I'd say!!
For then, all the filth, all the malice
The pain, the evil, the avarice
Would have been lost in the darkness of sight
For evil is evil only when something's bright
Then from my "eyes"
"Bad" would be as good as "nice"
Atleast I'd have a reason to believe
The world is a wonderful place to live!!
19 Comments:
At Tuesday, June 07, 2005 3:44:00 PM, Anonymous said…
No matter how hard you try or how lucky you are, life will eventually prove itself unworthy of living.
|At Wednesday, June 08, 2005 8:52:00 AM, Anand said…
Atleast I'd have a reason to believe
|The world is a wonderful place to live!!
You still have many...
At Thursday, June 09, 2005 1:47:00 PM, Anonymous said…
ur poem was great for the initial two-thirds, but why the dramatic pessimism?
|we all feel low sometimes, but don't u think it's an insult to all that u have and all that ppl do for u for u to say life isn't worth living and for u to wish u were blind?
cheer up
At Thursday, June 09, 2005 7:24:00 PM, Phoenix said…
@Nitin
|Here you go again...more praise
oh god!!!
:D
Anyway, I'll still take the booker
At Thursday, June 09, 2005 7:28:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Hey secy sir, i ditnt really take that poem that personally for once :D
|Basically what i did in the ending was to twist it up a bit in a way that can be viewd both as optimism and pessimism
it's all abt point of views..
And that's wat i wanted to see when ppl read it and reacted...
Thanx anyway for ur valuable words
At Friday, June 10, 2005 7:57:00 PM, Prasad Narulkar said…
BLACK movie inspired is it??
|;-)
nyce one...
At Saturday, June 11, 2005 1:01:00 PM, Phoenix said…
Oh Goddddd
|Why does everything i write have to be applied so damn literally to me!!!!!
And well banner, while i certainly AM out of my senses, dont draw too amny conclusions..
i was just trying to find something to feel good abt even for someone who has lost his vision!
At Tuesday, June 14, 2005 1:13:00 PM, Anonymous said…
ma u really write too well!!
|At Tuesday, June 14, 2005 1:14:00 PM, Anonymous said…
mam i meant
|At Tuesday, June 14, 2005 1:26:00 PM, Phoenix said…
thanx madame
|At Tuesday, June 14, 2005 1:26:00 PM, Phoenix said…
thanx madame
|At Tuesday, June 14, 2005 7:00:00 PM, Anonymous said…
poetress!!!
|soon screenplay writer
and then a wonderful director like Maniratnam...
At Wednesday, June 15, 2005 4:01:00 AM, Anonymous said…
if you cant see it, it is not there...
|At Monday, September 05, 2005 7:42:00 PM, arpana said…
May be if I were blind
|I would not see myself
I would not see my love
I would not see how ugly I am
I would not see how beautiful the world is
I would not know how it is to be ugly from the outside
For I would know ugliness only from the inside
I would not know colours
but I know what they stood for
for would I not know Jealousy
would I not know pain
would I be deprived of sorrow
would I not be angry yet again 'morrow
At Tuesday, September 06, 2005 12:35:00 PM, arpana said…
u there ? just got a comment from u on my blog , leave ur IM id the next time !
|At Wednesday, November 02, 2005 3:00:00 PM, Canary said…
hey there... wishing u a very happy diwali... :)
|At Tuesday, November 29, 2005 7:37:00 PM, xtremely_insane said…
hmmm that was beautiful. i've rarely read a poem on this topic.
|At Wednesday, December 07, 2005 4:34:00 PM, Wanderlust said…
oh,i simply cannot stop reading your stuff.you have a way with words.man!i should have come to your site before.thank god i did...better late than never.
|At Monday, October 04, 2010 3:02:00 PM, Anonymous said…
marvellous.... the beauty of black. So what if its a bit dark?
|Ankita
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